The Rewrite — The “Done-For-You” approach

Google Docs link preview — give the client a rewritten resume in the format you prefer.

Detailed Feedback — The “DIY” approach

I showed you how I’d rewrite it just in case you wanted to try the format that’s been working well for me so far. But in case you wanted to touch up your own instead of overhauling it, here are my thoughts:

The Good Stuff — What you like about their resume

Here are some examples

• You bring in your unique industry experience to differentiate yourself

• It’s a 1-pager

  

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• You highlight your achievements in your bullet points, not just your job description

• The formatting is clean and skimmable

Opportunities — Corrections you would make

• Area of Improvement #1

• Area of Improvement #2

  

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• Area of Improvement #3